Made in Korea??

[runningman]

Sounds like my idea might be made in Korea. The Koreans have showed the most interest in the idea. I have tried to keep it here but nobody here wants to commit other then Government people. Doesnt' make much sense since I have the backing of the USA Government but not a USA investor.. weird.. Time will tell though..

[KinKyJ]

Re: Made in Korea??

Sounds like my idea might be made in Korea. The Koreans have showed the most interest in the idea. I have tried to keep it here but nobody here wants to commit other then Government people. Doesnt' make much sense since I have the backing of the USA Government but not a USA investor.. weird.. Time will tell though..

Are you talking about your emergency light sabres?

[runningman]

Re: Made in Korea??

yes..

[Jenks]

Re: Made in Korea??

Communist!

[runningman]

Re: Made in Korea??

south korea..

[Wanni]

Re: Made in Korea??

What the hell are you babbling about? What is your invention?

[runningman]

Re: Made in Korea??

check it out.. my signature..

[picklemonkey]

Re: Made in Korea??

bro, I still wish you'd rewrite your page... i can't stress this enough.

[DJJEFFJONES]

Re: Made in Korea??

^^^ Agreed.

I like the idea very much though

[Jenks]

Re: Made in Korea??

All I asked for were frickin' sharks with frickin' laser beams attached to their heads.

[runningman]

Re: Made in Korea??

bro, I still wish you'd rewrite your page... i can't stress this enough.

Ya that is the old one.. I am taking that one down soon. The new one will be a lot better. That one served its purpose to just show people the idea. The new one will be the balls spared at no expense.. thx for your input though.. it is a piece of shit. $800..

[Jenks]

Re: Made in Korea??

thx for your input though.. it is a piece of shit.

Picklemonkey's input isn't a piece of shit

[KinKyJ]

Re: Made in Korea??

bro, I still wish you'd rewrite your page... i can't stress this enough.

Agree completely.

My firm is active in occupational health and safety and I have to say that I'm 100% that your product will have a market in Europe. But with a website like that... Nah...

Apart from the lay out and graphics which look very 90's, the text is too much "hey, look at my cool concept" and too little "buy my product, this is what you need!!!" It's missing sales punch in other words. Your unique selling points aren't emphasised, you're not creating "need" with the potential buyer (or not much), the style of the texts aren't sexy

Moreover, you're targeting a too small market. I have the impression that you're pushing the real estate/construction (evacs from large office buildings and such) too much. The industrial customers are much more interesting imo. I work a lot with companies that own large chemical/power plants or mass production factories. Now that's where the cash is AND the need. Emergency evacuation is especially in the chemical industry an item both the authorities as the corporations pay a lot of attention to. And your product imo solves a number of problems and facilitate others.

Now, I know you're in the stage of finding investors.You might think it's too early to pull out the marketing trickbox, but potential investors listen to Radio WII FM (What's In It For Me?). You should sell those guys like you'd sell buyers. When you can convince people that your product will sell, you'll find investors pretty easily.

So much for the sales talk (I used to work as an account manager ). I'm putting my industrial safety cap back on to ask you something: what background do you guys have? Don't get me wrong, but I get the impression that you hardly are in touch with the field of expertise of the market you're making your product for. Is there anybody in your team that has experience in industrial safety and/or emergency interventions/evacuations? I hope not because if there is, he's doing a lousy job...

My advice to you is:
- read up on legal requirements on evacuation equipment and procedures.
- read up on legal requirements on crisis management procedures and intervention plans.
- talk to safety engineers and firemen in the field to find out what "language" they speak and what their concerns/needs/problems are that could fit your product.
- do a market scan of available evacuation solutions available and find out where your product can deliver added value.

And oh yeah *changing my hardhat for my desk* It's nice to read you guys have "has a rare mixture of elite entrepreneurial, managerial and technical skills", but - no offence - anybody can say that. I think I'm pretty hot myself as a matter of fact What skills are you talking about? Same goes for the "working experience and superior business school education". Unless you only have experience flippin' burgers at McDo, I'd like to hear some credentials and name dropping.

Be more specific. Make me horny. Blow me away. Show me that you guys really know how to play ball. Convince me that this product is a sales hit. Get me to the point where I'd even give you a blowjob if that would get me on board of the venture.

Or else quit wasting my time and fuck off... (not to be taken personally )

[speciale]

Re: Made in Korea??

^^^^ How long did it take you to write that? what are you on atm?

[Kamal]

Re: Made in Korea??

what are you on atm?

Bad Trance ?