NEW DESIGN For flash site

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  • jusus
    Getting Somewhere
    • Apr 2005
    • 234

    NEW DESIGN For flash site

    http://www.jususdesign.com/alliance.gif




    http://www.jususdesign.com
  • asdf_admin
    i use to be important
    • Jun 2004
    • 12798

    #2
    Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

    umm. broken.
    dead, yet alive.

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    • jusus
      Getting Somewhere
      • Apr 2005
      • 234

      #3
      Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

      What's broken?
      http://www.jususdesign.com

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      • asdf_admin
        i use to be important
        • Jun 2004
        • 12798

        #4
        Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

        your link.

        " http://www.jususdesign.com/alliance.gif " = file:///D:/jusus/http/design/coolweb/source.xml

        you have it mapped out to your hard drive, not the web sir.
        dead, yet alive.

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        • palmer
          Retired or Simply Important
          • Jun 2004
          • 5383

          #5
          Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

          I feel like it isn't very focused. No real concept or thought put into it. More or less just putting some elements together to make a "cool" looking site. The colors are nice and the ornamentation is dope.

          However there is a disconnect between the elements (header, logo, background). The logotype looks very arbitrarily done, as does the header image. Like I have no idea what you are trying to tell me.

          Put some thought into what this community is going to be and develop an image/style/set of ideas you wish to communicate. You'll find your work will improve a lot once you decide to start trying to actually communicate some ideas.

          Hope this helps.
          todayistomorrow
          art direction | design | animation

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          • jusus
            Getting Somewhere
            • Apr 2005
            • 234

            #6
            Re: NEW DESIGN For flash site

            it's just a 1st version, in flash i'll connect all thing together :-)
            http://www.jususdesign.com

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