Production A new track - this is good

[space23uk]

started this on sunday, finished last night, its def one of my best ive dones so far

www.phuture-elements.com

In to Deep is a more driving sound than the first, very happy the way its turned out, builds up, please have a listen. Been compressed to an mp3 at lower quality, but still sounds good.
Let me know what you guys think.

[ang_mercury]

Re: A new track - this is good

I heard the track and its not bad but you have to try and make it sound more professional.

what production software you use ?

I also produce music and I use FL studio.
I make house tunes, my music sounds something like deep dish, umek, valentino kanzyani etc.

I might upload some tracks but first I will try to finish some of them.

this is sample

http://www.mysharefile.com/v/7242478/house_music.mp3.html

[ShawnD64]

Re: A new track - this is good

"sounding professional"? you have to be more specific. and keep in mind he said it was compressed to mp3 so some quaility was lost.

to me the kick takes up too much space and the bass is drowned out. maybe thats the compression here but, the bottom end seems muddy to me.

i am speaking of into deep here. my only complaint is its too long. it is a builder, but before that first breakdown, it just seems to take forever and get a tad boring imo. it sounds nice, but to me not much happens and i lose interest. gotta keep the ears happy. breakdown is nice, but again after it... kinda drags. i would chop down the length here. but thats just my opinion...

[djfm]

Re: A new track - this is good

hi. good track . to me the kick is a bit boomy. bring in a lttle riff to keep interest and using filter cut off to automate interset

[space23uk]

Re: A new track - this is good

i use reason 3, albelton 6, cubase sx3, t-tracks and diamond waves. I know that the bass is a little heavy on the mp3, it seems to show when its compressed, not sure why but seems to sound fine on wav.
the track was compressed from 90mb to 6mb so this may be the reason.
I only took 3 nights to do it so i still have to play about with it. I havent been doing production for long so mastering is a whole new world to me.
If anyone has examples from reason that have been mastered, normilised bassline, or good tutorials etc id be more than pleased to see, hear hear them. This is only the second track i have fully completed and but up for discussion.
Thank you all very much for feedback, its good to see critical comments and ones that i can take on board and improve my technique.
If you can explain what you mean by 'more professional'????
I also use a RME hamerfall audio card for better sound quality and to be honest the track quality sounds pretty good on my pc, i know that not everyone will have this and i have to make the track sound good for all but i could do with some more explaining.

[mnbvcxz]

Re: A new track - this is good

Nice work... keep it up.