Production just started this track need feedback

[victorgonzales]

Im stuck on what to do with this. About an hour into it and I hit a brick wall

http://www.edmnex.us/audio/victorgonzales/narrow-escape

[Jibgolly]

Re: just started this track need feedback

as of right now it sounds like a minimal or tech tool kinda track. like a filler you would bridge between two other tracks.

you should want to have some changing basslines and rhythms in the middle somewhere and have it birthed as a new track on the other end of whatever you weave in the middle. i look for a track to get deep, go deep, and come out wack when applicable.

[djfm]

Re: just started this track need feedback

you could put in some deep pads ,drones, filter sweeps, vocal snippets, synth stabs
you got a good foundation going there
keep working on it.