Production I need some feedback on new project

[kassios]

just tell me what you think about this track...it is not finished yet

http://rcpt.yousendit.com/620455197/bc6d09b9646c4595404712e7e8c5ff19

peace

[futura]

Re: I need some feedback on new project

Overall, I enjoyed the track. It has a nice melody, lead on it. It has a happy tilt - which I suppose is why it is called Joy. Cool.

I did like the layering. Seemed like a fair amount going on which gave it a depth, but something about the track never took off for me. I think I wanted it to be a bit more driving in the middle part. I am not sure what I'd want to make it more driving - a varied rhythm, or a different/more layered/texture thing going on?

The "acid synth" type thing going on is good - but I wanted it to go a bit more crazy.

Overall, a well put together track that does flow from start to end. Nice depth of layers at least from my perspective. The part in the middle could be a bit more engaging/driving and then come back down at the end again.

Not sure how detailed you wanted the feedback to be.

Good work.

[kassios]

Re: I need some feedback on new project

Overall, I enjoyed the track. It has a nice melody, lead on it. It has a happy tilt - which I suppose is why it is called Joy. Cool.

I did like the layering. Seemed like a fair amount going on which gave it a depth, but something about the track never took off for me. I think I wanted it to be a bit more driving in the middle part. I am not sure what I'd want to make it more driving - a varied rhythm, or a different/more layered/texture thing going on?

The "acid synth" type thing going on is good - but I wanted it to go a bit more crazy.

Overall, a well put together track that does flow from start to end. Nice depth of layers at least from my perspective. The part in the middle could be a bit more engaging/driving and then come back down at the end again.

Not sure how detailed you wanted the feedback to be.

Good work.

Thanks for the feedback mate i really appreciate it


peace