New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

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  • TheMightyGreg
    Editor Shmeditor
    • Nov 2006
    • 1361

    Production New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

    This is my third or fourth effort but it's the first one that I'd really want anyone else hearing!

    http://www.defected.com/mix/GregSawyer_YellowEyes.mp3

    Not 100% finished or mastered yet, but would really appreciate some feedback.

    Cheers
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    http://www.ubradio.net/djs/greg-sawyer-99?sort=7
  • jeffrey collins
    Not cool enough
    • Jun 2004
    • 7427

    #2
    Re: New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

    Being that you do work for Defected, I would have expected more melody in there. And that melody annoyed me...but that's just me bro.

    I would have liked to hear some changes in the chords that you did, perhaps with a few single line melodies to really keep things moving.
    Jeffrey Collins: Painter
    My Painting Blog

    http://soundcloud.com/jeffreycollins
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    • Weizy
      MCast Resident DJ
      • Jun 2004
      • 3166

      #3
      Re: New Track 'Yellow Eyes' - Feedback Please!

      The only feedback I have on this is that the percussion section stays relatively the same all the way throughout the track. You might want to consider adding some backbeats and having a transition or two that moves into some slightly different arrangement to keep things moving along.

      The track has some great potential as I would certainly place this one in my record box as an early house groove. Nice work!

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