Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

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  • srbbnd
    Platinum Poster
    • Jul 2005
    • 1088

    Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

    www.bestfilmsofthe20thcentury.com/

    www.forwardthinkingproduction.com/
  • 88Mariner
    My dick is smaller
    • Nov 2006
    • 7128

    #2
    Re: Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

    NSFW MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!










    jk. I would change "ticket 1" "ticket 2" to the actual titles. I think that would make things more clear to the initial viewing of the site.

    I noticed a graph pattern on the camera. Is that intended? just curious.
    you could put an Emfire release on for 2 minutes and you would be a sleep before it finishes - Chunky

    it's RA. they'd blow their load all over some stupid 20 minute loop of a snare if it had a quirky flange setting. - Tiddles

    Am I somewhere....in the corners of your mind....

    ----PEACE-----

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    • tiddles
      Encryption, Jr.
      • Jun 2004
      • 6861

      #3
      Re: Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

      if you care about SEO then you forgot your metatags and description

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      • dusk
        DUDERZ get a life!!!
        • Jun 2004
        • 7266

        #4
        Re: Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

        Love the old school feel of the Home page, I would however change the font to a more "retro" look.
        ~ You are what you think you are ~


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        • bobjuice
          Banned
          • May 2008
          • 4894

          #5
          Re: Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

          Originally posted by dusk
          Love the old school feel of the Home page, I would however change the font to a more "retro" look.

          good call i think

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          • srbbnd
            Platinum Poster
            • Jul 2005
            • 1088

            #6
            Re: Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

            Ya the camera is from an old 50's album and has a graph on it. How do I mess with the SEO tags? I will check around for some cool fonts and try to change the ticket names I think that is a good call.
            www.bestfilmsofthe20thcentury.com/

            www.forwardthinkingproduction.com/

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            • tiddles
              Encryption, Jr.
              • Jun 2004
              • 6861

              #7
              Re: Got a website up for my dad constructive criticism would be appreciated.

              all my sites are wordpress, so i don't do the html stuff but it looks like this:

              <meta name="description" content="description goes here for the search engines" />
              <meta name="keywords" content=keywords you want to rank for"/>

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