^^ I like it from purely a reading perspective but for me, I dont think you need to lay down what comes first and what comes later, i.e. dont put sand first and balls later..... you can always remove the sand and throw it as long in your own mind, you know the "place" they hold rather than the order you lay them down...
good read never-the-less
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good read never-the-less
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