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  • Digger
    Are you Kidding me??
    • Nov 2004
    • 2745
    #1

    my first logo!!

    well well well, im new in this bussines....so i want some positive/negative opinions to improve and teach myself way better...anyway i will let you do the work...it is for a band of rock...hes a friend of mine....

    La mala educacion

    at first i thought on that movie where gael garcia makes as a drag queen, never see the movie but just a funny thought! ...

    heres the logo.....dont know if it does had alot of stuff on it....let me know if can i improve it thanks in advanced
    Last edited by Digger; November 7, 2007, 06:08:45 PM.
    https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"> https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013
    All men dream: but not equally. Those who dream by night in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that it was vanity: but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dreams with open eyes, to make it possible.
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    • Digger
      Are you Kidding me??
      • Nov 2004
      • 2745
      #2
      Re: my first logo!!

      u think im gonna change the typo....
      https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"> https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013
      All men dream: but not equally. Those who dream by night in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that it was vanity: but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dreams with open eyes, to make it possible.

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        • asdf_admin
          i use to be important
          • Jun 2004
          • 12813
          #3
          Re: my first logo!!

          not bad. i would try removing the shadowing effect. The only reason is because you have the font shadow going one direction above, and the shadow on the bottom going the other opposite direction. also simply try black and white. You will be amazed how effective that is.

          well done. keep up the good work.
          dead, yet alive.

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            • Yao
              DUDERZ get a life!!!
              • Jun 2004
              • 8176
              #4
              Re: my first logo!!

              I was actually going to make the same remark on the shadow, lol. Just lose it, keyword is simplicity even when it needs to be a 'baroque' type of logo.

              Otherwise it looks pretty cool...
              Blowkick visual & graphic design - No Civilization. Now With Broadband.

              There are but three true sports -- bullfighting, mountain climbing, and motor-racing. The rest are merely games. -Hemingway

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                • Digger
                  Are you Kidding me??
                  • Nov 2004
                  • 2745
                  #5
                  Re: my first logo!!

                  thanks mate, gonna try that, to see if my friends like it !!
                  https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"> https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013
                  All men dream: but not equally. Those who dream by night in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that it was vanity: but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dreams with open eyes, to make it possible.

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                    • srbbnd
                      Platinum Poster
                      • Jul 2005
                      • 1091
                      #6
                      Re: my first logo!!

                      I like the logo, but it doesn't seem to fit the band...
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                        • jusus
                          Getting Somewhere
                          • Apr 2005
                          • 233
                          #7
                          Re: my first logo!!

                          Nice font and composition, byt it's not readable:-)
                          http://www.jususdesign.com

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                            • apollo_1444
                              Banned
                              • Oct 2006
                              • 485
                              #8
                              Re: my first logo!!

                              looks like a wedding invitation

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                                • Digger
                                  Are you Kidding me??
                                  • Nov 2004
                                  • 2745
                                  #9
                                  Re: my first logo!!

                                  Originally posted by apollo_1444
                                  looks like a wedding invitation
                                  yeah thats what i thought....thats why im gonna change the typo....i need something more manly :P
                                  https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013&g=bb" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"> https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013">https://soundcloud.com/jorgecortes/j...t-s-julio-2013
                                  All men dream: but not equally. Those who dream by night in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that it was vanity: but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dreams with open eyes, to make it possible.

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                                    • Yao
                                      DUDERZ get a life!!!
                                      • Jun 2004
                                      • 8176
                                      #10
                                      Re: my first logo!!

                                      what kind of music is it?

                                      heavy metal could use some blend between gothic and baroque...dark stuff. Normal rock? something that simply captures the feel of the music. ACDC and Kiss logos are still well known for example.
                                      Blowkick visual & graphic design - No Civilization. Now With Broadband.

                                      There are but three true sports -- bullfighting, mountain climbing, and motor-racing. The rest are merely games. -Hemingway

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                                        • Shpira
                                          Angry Boy Child
                                          • Oct 2006
                                          • 4970
                                          #11
                                          Re: my first logo!!

                                          I thought it was for a private school or something...lol yeah not a band definitely.
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